SAND33P Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 Had to make a quick logo for someone, what do you think and any constructive criticism? WARNING - BIG PICTURE http://i51.tinypic.com/2q1w9y8.png Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheHowler Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 I like it Personally I would have used the blue for the rest of the writinng, but thats just cause I like the colour Quote My Brick Wall Tutorial....|....My Gallery....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAND33P Posted October 20, 2011 Author Share Posted October 20, 2011 (edited) Yeah, but i had to put multiple colours as LED Dance Floors have loads of colours and stuff I was considering using the ClubLand font. But thats a bit cliche. Its become overused like the Batman Forever font. Edited October 20, 2011 by SAND33P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HELEN Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 It's really nice. I like it. It will get everyone's attention for sure. Quote Don't spit into the well, you might drink from it later. -----Yiddish ProverbGlossy Galaxy Ball---How to Make FoliageMy Gallery PDN Fans--My DA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mountnman Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 i think the center of the d should be a bit darker to define the letter.. but thats just me Quote SARCASM- Just one of the many services I offer free to the public. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ego Eram Reputo Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 Very nice logo - hope you charged them lots for it! Why not post it here: http://forums.getpaint.net/index.php?/topic/14494-advanced-critique-read-rules-first/ ? That's the place for this type of discussion Quote ebook: Mastering Paint.NET | resources: Plugin Index | Stereogram Tut | proud supporter of Codelab plugins: EER's Plugin Pack | Planetoid | StickMan | WhichSymbol+ | Dr Scott's Markup Renderer | CSV Filetype | dwarf horde plugins: Plugin Browser | ShapeMaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadJik Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 Hi, My view on this (just my humble opinion): 1. The D should be squared instead rounded... 2. The background halo (blue behind the L, magneta behing the Ddance) give some unbalanced aspect. 3. Are these colors a good choice? I'm missing yellow or green. 4. I would try with a thin white 3d grid under the dance floors words. Quote My DeviantArt | My Pictorium | My Plugins | Donate via Paypal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadJik Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 I give it a try: http://i54.tinypic.com/2uqke3d.png 1600x400 <200kb Quote My DeviantArt | My Pictorium | My Plugins | Donate via Paypal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAND33P Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 (edited) Wow thats pretty amazing, i see the grid technique really works! The glows around the led are pretty epic, the grid under dancefloors isnt working for me though. That logo is epic, but wen it comes to creating it in a vector format for signs and imprints on metal im not sure it would work. Ill have a look at the spacing of dancefloor and the shape of the D on my logo, iwasnt really happy with the D myself. @ego - i did it for free, kinda a family company thing, im working on another logo for the main company today : AVH - Audio Visual Hire. I dont have a rushed deadline for this one so i can make it perfect before showing it to them @MadJik - I really like the multitude of colours you used behind the L and the blues behind the D, did you do those manually or is there a Plugin / Effect for that range oif colours? Edited October 21, 2011 by SAND33P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadJik Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 ...@MadJik - I really like the multitude of colours you used behind the L and the blues behind the D, did you do those manually or is there a Plugin / Effect for that range oif colours? It's mainly the pixelate plugin after creating a colored background. Quote My DeviantArt | My Pictorium | My Plugins | Donate via Paypal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAND33P Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 Ohk kool, ill give that a go when im on PC Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barbieq25 Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 I agree with Welshy on the original logo to move "dance" 10 or so pixels. Still on your logo which I like very much esp. the way you have added the UK bit - I tried a 1 pt outline on the white text of LED & then Gaussain Blurred it by 5. It makes the letters stand off the background a bit. You make a good choice in the font, the colours etc. They should be mighty plased. Madjik's is very cool too but I'd get rid of the coloured grid on the LED. If anything I'd make them black. The logo concept is fabulous - black with colour. I hope to see more of these from you. Quote Knowledge is no burden to carry. April Jones, 2012 Gallery My DA Gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAND33P Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 (edited) Thanks everyone, i am currently working on a logo for AVH - Audio Visual Hire, any ideas??? I am going to create the simple led one used for imprints and signs etc tommorow but i still have no ideas for AVH. Pics pretty big, but it gets resized automatically :-) Here's the AVH one i was talking about, this is pretty good and may be the final one, any ideas welcome / advice aswell Edited October 22, 2011 by SAND33P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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