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Here are some of my works. All of them have been made in the past 2 weeks. I made them with paint.NET with some c4d's and some pics from google.

This was the first that I had did in a while:

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This is the second one that I had did(well v2 of the second one I did):

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Here is the third one that I made this yesterday night at around 11:00pm:

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(it has a white border bottom)

And my fourth one which I made yesterday night around 1:00am:

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I am looking for actual critique so be TRUTHFUL, not mean, truthful. And list your likes or dislikes.

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Really nice signatures. My favourite is the third. The skull goes good with the colours.

Really? I thought it looked really good when I was making it, but I was sleepy. So when I woke up I thought it looked alright.

The colors are bordering on intense on most of them, otherwise great sigs.

Yea the color's are supposed to be eye catching and 'intense'.

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I think they are a little too intense, here is some detailed critique (not bashing, just critique):

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The blue in the center is a little strong (bright, distracting), but otherwise you've got a great sig going. Also, the text just doesn't match (100% opacity and pure white with blue and more blue is not the best combo). I would give it a, assuming you use the USA grading scale, a B (83).

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This one is actually pretty good. The colors are not too intense because the magenta/red is negated by the blue. Nice border. Text and C4D's are quite similar to the sig above. A- (91).

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The idea is nice but mediocre execution. The magenta is not at all equaled by the minuscule amounts of blue in the corners. The text is a little more coordinated and I would love to view a toned-down version of this sig. B- (76).

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Not bad. There are equal amounts of magenta and cyan/blue, but the color scheme is extremely repetitive between your four sigs.

I like what you did here and the text is above average. A (94).

Overall, I say you have great potential if you stick around, but try a different type of graphics, even a different type of sigs, rather than C4D, text, and MAGENTA and BLUE. It gets a tad overwhelming.

I would give this gallery a B or more specifically, an 86/100.

There is nothing to lose when venturing into unexplored lands (maybe in real life there is, but not in art...)

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@csm725

Yeah this was actually my venture into new lands! I usually use stocks but those are never that good. The first one actually started as a gears of war sig but then I saw how awesome the c4d was and the stock didn't really match so I kind of experimented and I got that. I liked it so I started to build onto that. And the reason the last two are the same color is because I used almost the same exact techniques for both of them...:biggrin:

@chrisco97

Yes there is actually. I used two different ones:

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and

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And for textures I used SKULLS! If you look in the middle you can see a pile of skulls and the background(it is actually the third; right after the c4d I have right above; and the first layer which is a gradient) is consisted of 2 very large skulls pointed in different directions.

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