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  1. I think I'm going to have to just give up and call this image a failure. I tried angling the wing, drawing the shadow on the wing itself and even redrawing the feathers so their overlap pattern was going the opposite direction.(Feathers don't overlap like that and it became very clear very quickly) It now looks like the wing is being bent in the middle and that its tiny. And now I'm sick of this picture and am just washing my hands of it and calling it a total abject failure. Also I think beveling the blood was a mistake.

     

     

    My Final attempt.

     

     


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  2. One of my players made this comment about it.

     

    it would be hard to find something not disturbing there


    The way it's colored is just strange and i mean a lovecraft kind of strange, gives an otherwordly look in a bad way. More than half the image is just unintelligible, i mean other than the guy with the deranged face (and my goodness, i can tell that was not the intention) and what i can assume are minotaurs i really could not get an idea of what is going on or what i am seeing, other than a collection of colors,filters and pseudo-shapes. I mean jesus what the hell is going on in the bottom left and top left/right.
    I mean you got the hellish acid trip dimension right. you got it too right in fact

     

    He didn't like it.

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    I spent probably the better part of 4 months on this image. II got most of it done but then was so sick and tired of it I stopped for about two months. Eventually I realized I just didn't want to do more on it, ever. So I vomited up a background and called it done.

     

    First off its too large for my computer, I couldn't do anything without it lagging.a lot so that added to the frustration. But Primarily, I intended to add battle damage and corpses and scattered equipment. But I found I really hate drawing the same image or character multiple times. And thats basically what I would be doing. Thats just super boring to me. I could barely bring myself to finish the few repetitions there are already in the image.

     

    I also screwed up a lot of the proportions, which I will blame on fatigue due to the large image size.

     

    So I am never trying a large image again. Ever.

  4. I've been working on this single rather giant image for weeks now. Its absolutely the single largest image I've ever attempted and I've noticed my day to day rate of progress is decreasing as I get, I guess fatigued is the closest word to it. Maybe sick of it or bored by it are more accurate. I work on it and work on it and there is still so much to do. How do you handle large image fatigue? Or is this something only I seem to be getting.

  5. @AmadeusX

     

    Its pretty boring to me. The Grammar is very wrong. But I guess the colors are fine.

     

    @Bondenson

     

    I see no errors in what you did. I can't really compliment you on any of the art because its not yours, and I don't think what you did made any of the pre-existing images better.

     

     

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    This was done completely in paint.net and I want to be criticized. Forewarning I am likely to respond to your criticisms with questions however do not mistake them for excuses or defensiveness. I just want to fully understand your opinions so I know what and how to apply them to improving.

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