Hello, this is my result (attached). It's a bit lighter than yours. I didn't figure out how to apply the gradient to the white lines,
so I instead used gaussian blur and applied a glow. At the end, instead of turning light to 0 I turned it up a bit. I didn't use Vignette.
Edit: This is my first try at this so it's not very original but I need to learn for now. I will be more original in my creations.