I do like your image janettsue, I think it's a really nice image.
However, I agree mainly with what the others said, some of the spiders look too flat.
With just a little lighting and a few tweaks the image could be really amazing!
Also, here are my images, I downloaded lots of new effects and was just playing around with them, I prefer the second image, I think the first is too busy.
Original Image
That's me done here.
Bye.