Flow55 Posted December 9, 2008 Share Posted December 9, 2008 IMO it's great, and the shade of blue is perfect. Quote My Gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Down Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 Help: I need to turn this beach fail into a beach win. More cartoony then ashes. Quote •♪♫♥♫♪• |- The Rules -|- çobblestones -|- CaMo -|- MeTaL -| ╠═╧╨»Φ«╨╤═╣ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kemaru Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 Some feathering, :AlphaChannel: gradients and color adjustments should do the job. Any ideas? I thought of adding a few more planets, a few bigger stars and some more of that weird space dust, but I wanted to hear your opinion first. (I know the earth looks poor. ) Quote Hatred does not cease by hatred, but only by love; this is the eternal rule. |fb(page)|portfolio|blog| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TopHATslash Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 Blur the blue outline which is suppose to be the atmospheric haze.. blur that. It will look a lot better. Anyone have any suggestions for my current? I'm not sure what to add exactly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 Texture the background? Quote Create A Professional-Looking Product Advertisment Mockup flickr | Deviant Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 18, 2008 Share Posted December 18, 2008 @ kemaru: perhaps you should add clouds to the earth? If you're going for realism that could help. I really like the starry background and the galaxy you put at the top. @tHs: maybe some more stuff on the sides? it looks sort of empty there. Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroTechniques Posted December 18, 2008 Share Posted December 18, 2008 tHs: I would suggest getting rid of the current side-thingies altogether, and substituting a chrome-ized 'suspension frame' type thing, like the Golden Gate Bridge only in chrome. Actually, that's not a very good way of putting it, but I can't come up with any better ways. You get what I mean? Quote Photobucket Sucks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
007 Nab Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 tHs: You've got some aliasing issues that need to be taken care of. I can see you tried blurring/feathering the left side, but that's not good enough man! You're certainly expanding in the 100% PDN field of graphics, keep it up. Quote "pyrochild, you're my favorite person ever. We should go snowboarding some time."~ 007 Nab. Ish. PDN Gallery | I Made a Deviant Art! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 a new sig I'm working on. It just seems to be missing something :? Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
007 Nab Posted December 20, 2008 Share Posted December 20, 2008 And that's all PDN? Wow- you've gotten even better than before! The gradient cut off is a bit strange, though the branches coming out of the frame look very good. I would add some background effects - such as leaves or a light source. Some distant lands like in your other WIP would also add some great depth. Quote "pyrochild, you're my favorite person ever. We should go snowboarding some time."~ 007 Nab. Ish. PDN Gallery | I Made a Deviant Art! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Thanks! is this better? I: moved the view to get more of the planets, and added some distant hills. I blurred them a bit to add some depth of field, and made one sort of transparent. I also redid the gradient so it didn't end suddenly. Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
007 Nab Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Better! Yes! I still insist on a more defined light source such as the one you showed in your gallery. Great job girl ( ) *I've always assumed everyone on this forum except for people that specify are males, I guess you learn something new every day) Quote "pyrochild, you're my favorite person ever. We should go snowboarding some time."~ 007 Nab. Ish. PDN Gallery | I Made a Deviant Art! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 like this? I actually used the shine from the one in my gallery, with some curves+, to concentrate the shine, so it wouldn't seem like just ambient light. *actually, so have I. heh. Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
007 Nab Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Yes, though by itself I couldn't see much difference, when I lined it up with the previous version I could see what you mean. I like this newer one better, though there's just something unfinished about it... EDIT: Now that I think about it, I think this could be the final deal. If you stopped here, I would accept it as an excellent signature. Adding some text and a border might be nice, but other than that I think it's good. Quote "pyrochild, you're my favorite person ever. We should go snowboarding some time."~ 007 Nab. Ish. PDN Gallery | I Made a Deviant Art! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Thanks! Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TopHATslash Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 tHs: You've got some aliasing issues that need to be taken care of. I can see you tried blurring/feathering the left side, but that's not good enough man! You're certainly expanding in the 100% PDN field of graphics, keep it up. Well I am working on a laptop thats not even mine. Its 4 years old. The trackpad is very slow and annoying. +I did it in a moving car during a 12 hour drive. I'll work on it when I get back to florida and I can work on my desktop. Then I can steady the :AlphaChannel:gradients. The only thing I had to access was feather. Thanks for the compliments though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReptiGuy Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 I'm new to making graphics so I need some help. What kind of text do you think would look best with this picture? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaNight Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Im working on this Wallpaper.. (PhotoBucket dosn't allow the right size, so it's a bit off Scale) I would like to get some criticism on what might not look right.. Quote --|-- My DeviantArt--|--My Gallery--|-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 ReptiGuy: I don't know, something rounded and sans serif, most likely, to match the style. I'm not exactly the best candidate to give you a matching font, though. :? MegaNight: look at the dropdown list under the downloader. I think your screen size should be there. Perhaps the planet in the background could be either made brighter or darker, as right now it's at an uncomfortable middle that directs the eye to where the portal and the planet overlap. Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReptiGuy Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Well this is what I have right now: Is there an easy way to add border around things? I want to add a boarder around the letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZizOiz Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 indeed. What you want is Pyrochild's outline object plugin, found here. Quote Click on my signature image for my gallery | hmmmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReptiGuy Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Here it is: I thought it would turn out better but I guess it's ok. What can I do to make it better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaNight Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 MegaNight: look at the dropdown list under the downloader. I think your screen size should be there. Perhaps the planet in the background could be either made brighter or darker, as right now it's at an uncomfortable middle that directs the eye to where the portal and the planet overlap. Thanks.. What i ment with Photobucket is, that im to cheap to pay to be able to upload in sizes beyond 1024 x 768.. I didn't notice that problem with the planet.. but i'll try something that might make it comfortable. Quote --|-- My DeviantArt--|--My Gallery--|-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thanksgiving Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 How can I improve this? Quote Started Paint.net on Sunday, December 21, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaNight Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 Here it is: I thought it would turn out better but I guess it's ok. What can I do to make it better? Use some Feather (Boltbait addon) on Yoshi, remove the Black from the text and use Outline, to make that effect, it should be a lot better then. How can I improve this? Same as above use the feather plugin (Boltbait addon) Quote --|-- My DeviantArt--|--My Gallery--|-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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