llama song

[Rainshadow]

I made up a song called the llama song. I need help writing another verse.

Could you help? This is what I have so far:

I was once a treehouse, I lived in a cake, but I never saw how the pen slayed the rake. I was three years dead, but I told a tale, and now listen little child, to the safety rail

I was once a book, I lived in a pool, but I never saw how the tape slayed the mule. I was 4 years dead, but I told a lie, and now listen little child to the fishes eye.

I once was a toilet, I lived in a box, but I never saw how the grape slayed the fox. I was 5 years dead, but I told a man, listen little child to your fathers van.

I once was a toenail, I lived in a boot, but I never saw how the card slayed the coot. I was 6 years dead but I told a fish, listen little child to the squirming dish.

and to make up another verse, you need to:

I once was a (insert noun here)I lived in a(n)(insert noun here) but I never saw how the (insert noun) slayed the (insert noun rhyming with the second noun)I was (insert number)years dead, but I told a (insert noun here) listen little child to (your, the) (insert adjective here)(insert noun rhyming with the 5th noun)

Confusing enough?

:twisted:

[The_Lionhearted]

I was once a treehouse, I lived in a cake, but I never saw how the pen slayed the rake. I was three years dead, but I told a tale, and now listen little child, to the safety rail

It's actually "I was once a treehouse, I lived in a cake, but I never saw the way the orange slayed the rake...I was only three years dead, but it told a tale, and now listen little child, to the safety rail."

http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/llama.php

[usedHONDA]

Aaahhhh! I turn off the speakers and I still hear it! Aaahhhh!

[The_Lionhearted]

Aaahhhh! I turn off the speakers and I still hear it! Aaahhhh!

Oh man it's a classic.

[usedHONDA]

Here's a llama

There's a llama

And another little llama

Fuzzy llama

Funny llama

Llama llama

Duck

Llama llama

Cheesecake

Llama

Tablet

Brick

Potato

Llama

Llama llama

Mushroom

Llama

Llama llama

Duck

I was once a treehouse

I lived in a cake

But I never saw the way

The orange slayed the rake

I was only three years dead

But it told a tale

And now listen, little child

To the safety rail

Did you ever see a llama

Kiss a llama

On the llama

Llama's llama

Tastes of llama

Llama llama

Duck

Half a llama

Twice the llama

not a llama

Farmer

Llama

Llama in a car

Alarm a llama

Llama

Duck

Is THIS how it's told now?

Is it all so old?

Is it made of lemon juice?

Doorknob

Ankle

Cold

Now my song is getting thin

I've run out of luck

Time for me to retire now

And become a duck

You can almost sing it!

[The_Lionhearted]

Even better....

http://www.badgerbadgerbadger.com

[usedHONDA]

I've seen that one before.

You should look up the remix version.

[Rainshadow]

Yep, and I'm makeing my own verses like the treehouse that lived in a cake

[Hotchickforu]

HAHA i love that song have it on my imvu page

Here's a llama

There's a llama

And another little llama

Fuzzy llama

Funny llama

Llama llama

Duck

Llama llama

Cheesecake

Llama

Tablet

Brick

Potato

Llama

Llama llama

Mushroom

Llama

Llama llama

Duck

I was once a treehouse

I lived in a cake

But I never saw the way

The orange slayed the rake

I was only three years dead

But it told a tale

And now listen, little child

To the safety rail

Did you ever see a llama

Kiss a llama

On the llama

Llama's llama

Tastes of llama

Llama llama

Duck

Half a llama

Twice the llama

not a llama

Farmer

Llama

Llama in a car

Alarm a llama

Llama

Duck

Is THIS how it's told now?

Is it all so old?

Is it made of lemon juice?

Doorknob

Ankle

Cold

Now my song is getting thin

I've run out of luck

Time for me to retire now

And become a duck

You can almost sing it!

[Down]

Quite the bump...>_>

[Hotchickforu]

What? im new sorry

Quite the bump...>_>

[pyrochild]

What? im new sorry

Quite the bump...>_>

"bump" means the thread was dead. nobody had posted in it for a long time, and you bumped it. There's actually a rule against this, so please refrain.

[Hotchickforu]

eekk im sorry

What? im new sorry

Quite the bump...>_>

"bump" means the thread was dead. nobody had posted in it for a long time' date=' and you bumped it. There's actually a rule against this, so please refrain.[/quote']