greenglen Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 (edited) Apart from the cricketers image, all hand-crafted in Paint.NET Maybe someone else will offer more constructive criticism? Edited April 7, 2010 by greenglen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theonlychad Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 I don't quite see where you are trying to go with this image. The work is alright for a beginner. The sky should be blue or is that the style you are going for? The images that are cut outs could be feathered (plugin created by boltbait). You have potential so don't get down on yourself. I suggest that you take a stroll over to the tutorials section of the forum and take a crack at some of the newcomer tutorials. They are quite helpful and informative. Also please don't make a new topic every time you create a new image. As per the forum rules you are only allowed one thread in the pictorium sub forum. For questions and image help please use the general discussion sub forum. Welcome to the paint.net forums and i hope that you stick around and learn some things best regards, chad Quote "Clearly it's a very serious and literal meaning. If you're not solving physics equations then get off my lawn!-Rick Brewster Paint.net Lead Developer" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarkut Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 I kinda' like it. The shadows are all incongruent with each other and with the sun's position as primary light source. (Perhaps that's deliberate.) Maybe give the cricketers, fruit, and dish some shadows. Give the bananas some curve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axle Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 now who has ever heard of a 'straight' banana but apart from that i just dont get what the image is meant to do. the perspective is all so wrong and you need to feather the cut outs (like theonlychad said) and why is there a grey person outline on the building on the right?? Quote My Deviant Art | My Gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltBait Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Brilliant! Guys, the piece is conceptual. Deal with it. Will you be correcting Picaso's work next? I love the fact that the shadow of the apple on the tree is red. Nice move! Quote Click to play: Download: BoltBait's Plugin Pack | CodeLab | and how about a Computer Dominos Game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warfighter67 Posted April 7, 2010 Share Posted April 7, 2010 Yeah its not all at bad, a few tutorials and plugins and he can have some great work. i think its pretty good imo. Quote My Soundclick!--Well of Souls MMO--Gallery--Facebook--Photobucket--Cool Tile Texture! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenglen Posted April 8, 2010 Author Share Posted April 8, 2010 (edited) Brilliant! Guys, the piece is conceptual. Deal with it. Will you be correcting Picaso's work next? I love the fact that the shadow of the apple on the tree is red. Nice move! Thanks for taking the time to think about it. I recently discovered your Sharpen Landscape plugin and ran a before and after test. Result: excellent. Edited April 8, 2010 by greenglen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenglen Posted April 8, 2010 Author Share Posted April 8, 2010 Yeah its not all at bad, a few tutorials and plugins and he can have some great work. i think its pretty good imo. Thanks Weylin. That's all I ask for - helpful advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barbieq25 Posted April 8, 2010 Share Posted April 8, 2010 Like BoltBait, I like the image. It's fantastic to see a new style. Great humour too. What I especially like is the box with the reflection. Brilliant! The second image you've done a great job on too. I hope to see a lot more work from you. Quote Knowledge is no burden to carry. April Jones, 2012 Gallery My DA Gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerry533482 Posted April 8, 2010 Share Posted April 8, 2010 Kinda weird, but I like it. Quote Space...The Final Frontier. -James Tiberius Kirk; circa 2260s My gallery: Jerry's Paint.NET creations My tuts: sun galaxy rings My youtube: http://www.youtube.com/jerry533482 YLOD VICTIM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenglen Posted April 8, 2010 Author Share Posted April 8, 2010 Like BoltBait, I like the image. It's fantastic to see a new style. Great humour too. What I especially like is the box with the reflection. Brilliant! The second image you've done a great job on too. I hope to see a lot more work from you. Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenglen Posted April 8, 2010 Author Share Posted April 8, 2010 I like it too. If every image had to make sense, I wouldn't post that much. Loads of potential to keep adding as you wish. Love the buildings, and the trees Thank you too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenglen Posted April 8, 2010 Author Share Posted April 8, 2010 Kinda weird, but I like it. Thank you. Weird is good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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