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Text has no sense of order. Not sure of the "misfitten" as in it doesn't make too much sense. Misplaced has only one "s".

maybe something like:

I am:

.........broken

..............crumpled

....................misplaced

Use less words & avoid the repetition. The ellipses here show spaces. Otherwise it is very nice.

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Knowledge is no burden to carry.

 

April Jones, 2012

 
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