My second image made in paint.net sayng jonythewarrior

[bdjony1]

please comment my second image.made by bdjony1

I acept critiqs beacause its with critiqs that i'm learning how to make better images

sorry the horryblr english

[sokagirl]

I would remove the text , it would look better without it ..

[bdjony1]

it's better now? :?:

[sokagirl]

I liked the first set of colors you had .