sokagirl Posted May 30, 2009 Share Posted May 30, 2009 Great poems you guys I'm liking this thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th3mirr0r Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 I COULD WRITE... 1 quote 4 that! 'Be Yourself' I could write the many things i wish to say, Here, now, just to enchant ur mind And then, to delet all i wrote, in the next day, Just to show you that was nothing written yesterday, And u was blind... I could write the many things i like to do, In quick phrases, to satisfy ur curiousity, today, But later, i will erase all the words i wrote you, And all u'll see will be a clear background, grey... I could write a lot of words, describing myself, Just to show how interesting person i can be, But right after that i won't say anything, And i will leave and let u solve that mistery... I could write u a collection of books with my life, Just to show the beauty of Life, But right after that, i will burn those books, Cos the complex words are nothing to me, But only the simplest ones, Full of truth, cold as ice, Will be those musical tones, That i always wish to hear, So, then, these ones are written but not deleted; These truths, now, were stated. @Th3Mirr0r I STILL THINK OF YOU, JOY MARIE.. I still think of you, my dearest one from all my Friends, Joy Marie, A live remembrance of a woman loved, from my past, Wide alike sky, deep alike sea, Filling my eyes with its light... May the years change around us, and one day, being old, To remember the honest words, in our letters, told, We'll be somewhere on a bench, smiling, Hearing the wind's calling.. Alike a flute sound, the leafs in their hum, make noise, Falling slowly, slowly, down... It wasnt their choice, To be there, on the ground; Was the nature's way and law Who brought in the autumne's rainy clouds, The 7 colors of rainbow And the rain stoped those days.. I will still remember u, my dear Friend, Joy Marie, As with the same eyes to look at u, Wishing, curious alike a baby, to see, If the prayer to our Lord, for u, Brought happiness and peace, In ur life.. I still think of you, Joy Marie, Alike in past, day by day, Wishing to be near you, To hold you, To whisper these words: 'I love you, Joy Marie, my dearest Friend, I wish to be with you, as much you do'... I will be on a bench, when, old, watching the sky, Remembering my past, i will smile, I will find again the happiness, Before i die.. Meanwhile, I will live my life as it is... So wonderfull is the life when u love! ! ! I reach to sigh, looking to the sky above, Thinking when will be that moment when i'll close my eyes.. I will see then, a Friend from my past, happy; I will know then that my prayers were listened And once again, i will smile... I will join a new life, there, near my beloved waterfall... Then, looking at the water, i will whisper a call; The same flute sound, Looking beyound, i will know something: Peace that was found, Again, from nothing... But i will still think of you, Joy Marie... poem dedicated to Joy Marie G.Solomon @Th3Mirr0r [ROMANIAN VERSION] Inca ma gandesc la tine, Joy Marie... Inca ma gandesc la tine, cea mai draga dintre toti Prietenii mei, Joy Marie, O vie amintire a unei femei iubite, din trecutul meu, Larg precum cerul, adanc precum marea, Umplandu-mi ochii cu lumina sa... Fie ca anii sa se schimbe in jurul nostru, iar intr-o zi, fiind batran, Sa-mi amintesc cuvintele sincere, in scrisorile noastre, spuse, Vom fi undeva, pe o banca, zambind, Ascultand chemarea vantului... Precum un sunet de nai, frunzele in agitatia lor, sa faca zgomot, Cazand usor, usor, jos... Nu a fost alegerea lor, Sa fie acolo, pe pamant; A fost legea si felul de-a fi a naturii Ce a adus in norii ploiosi ai toamnei, Cele 7 culori de curcubeu Si ploaia s-a oprit in acele zile.. Tot imi voi aduce aminte de tine, dragra mea Prietena, Joy Marie, Precum cu aceeasi ochi voi privi la tine, Vrand, curios precum un prunc, sa vad, Daca rugaciunea catre Domnul nostru, pentru tine, A adus pace si fericire, In viata ta... Inca ma gandesc la tine, Joy Marie, Precum in trecut, zi de zi, Dorind sa fiu langa tine, Sa te tin, Sa-ti soptesc aceste cuvinte: 'Te iubesc, Joy Marie, draga mea Prietena, Vreau sa fiu cu tine, precum vrei si tu'... O sa fiu pe o banca, cand, batran, privind cerul, Amintindu-mi trecutul meu, voi zambi, O sa gasesc din nou fericirea, Inainte de-a muri... Intre timp O sa-mi traiesc viata asa cum este... Ce minunata este viata atunci cand iubesti! ! ! Ajung sa oftez, privind la cer, deasupra, Cugentand la momentul cand imi voi inchide ochii... Imi voi vedea apoi o Prietena, din trecut, fericita; O sa stiu atunci ca rugaciunile mi-au fost ascultate Si inca o data, voi zambi... Voi urma o alta viata, acolo, langa cascada mea iubita... Apoi, uitandu-ma la apa, o sa soptesc o chemare; Acelasi sunet de nai, Privind dincolo de el, voi sti ceva: Pacea ce a fost gasita, Din nou, din nimic... Dar inca ma voi gandi la tine, Joy Marie... Poem dedicat pentru Joy Marie G. Solomon @Th3Mirr0r THE ROSE & THE PRINCESS Look at me With your eyes, full of honesty And i will turn the color of my petals in white; Look at me With your eyes, full of love And i will turn the color of my petals in red; Look at me With your mind And i will show you the little drops of water, Flowing down, slowly, among my petals, white, Look at me With your heart And i will show you the little sparks of fire, Rising up, fast, among my petals, red... Sweet hands holding me tight at her chest, White, The thorns, stungs her left breast And a small dropp of blood flows, Red, Followed by another, Again, and again, Alike a spring who arised now from a mountain.. She looks at her wound and once with her eyes, Silver, Once with my leafs, green, alike jade, My petals turn to red.. The little drops of blood covered my petals.. Her silver eyes let falling down, in rivers, Of tears, a waterfall... Hold me tight near your heart, Princess; Let your tears fall down, slowly, On my petals.. Hold me close to your lips, Princess; Let my fragrance surround you in a silent kiss And you'll find then soothe, kissing my petals... Ah, may your wound provoked by my thorns Be covered by my robe! Dressed in white with red, you will be, In Harmony, princess! May the nightingale sing for u her lovelly thrills And from your eyes, those tears, Honest, full of love and peace, Crystals and diamonds, may them be! And i will turn the color of my petals in white, When your honest eyes, will look at me; And i will turn the color of my petals in red, When with love, you'll hold me; And i will show you the little drops of water, Flowing from the spring of ur heart, Alike from a fountain who never drains.. And i will show you the little sparks of fire, Rising up from your eyes, Alike the morning's star, who never dies... @Th3Mirr0r [ROMANIAN VERSION] Trandafirul si Printesa Priveste la mine Cu ochii tai, plini de onestitate Si-mi voi schimba culoarea petalelor mele in alb; Priveste la mine, plina de iubire Si-mi voi schimba culoarea petalelor mele in rosu; Priveste la mine Cu mintea ta Si-ti voi arata micile picaturi de apa, Curgand jos, domol, printre petalele mele, albe, Priveste la mine Cu inima ta Si-ti voi arata micile scantei ale focului, Ridicandu-se sus, rapid, printre petalele mele, rosii... Maini dragute tinandu-ma strans la pieptul ei, Alb, Spinii, intepara sanul ei stang Si o picatura de sange curge, Rosu, Urmata de o alta, Iar, si iar, Precum un izvor ce rasarise din munte... Ea se uita la rana sa si o data cu ochii ei, Argintii, O data cu frunzele mele, verzi, precum jadul, Petalele mele se schimba in rosu.. Micile picaturi de sange mi-au acoperit petalele.. Ochii ei argintii au lasat sa cada jos, in siroaie, De lacrimi, o cascada... Tine-ma strans langa inima ta, Printesa; Lasa-ti lacrimile sa cada jos, usor, Deasupra petalelor mele... Tine-ma aproape de buzele tale, Printesa; Lasa-mi parfumul sa te inconjoare intr-un sarut in tacere Si vei gasi atunci alinare, sarutandu-mi petalele... Ah, fie ca rana provocata de spinii mei Sa fie acoperita de mantia mea! Imbracata in rosu si alb, vei fi, In Armonie, printesa! Fie ca privighetoarea sa cante pentru tine cantecele sale incantatoare Iar din ochii tai, acele lacrimi, Sincere, pline de dragoste si pace, Cristale si diamante, fi-vor ele! Si o sa-mi schimb culoarea petalelor mele in alb, Cand ochii tai sinceri vor privi la mine; Si o sa-mi schimb culoarea petalelor mele in rosu, Cand cu dragoste, ma vei tine; Si-ti voi arata micile picaturi de apa, Curgand din izvorul inimii tale, Precum o fantana ce nu seaca niciodata.. Si-ti voi arata micile scantei de foc, Rasarind din ochii tai, Precum steaua diminetii, ce niciodata nu moare... @Th3Mirr0r P.S: ART & POETRY Project: Check my website to find out more: www.th3mirr0r.ismywebsite.com. Is a site of ART; wonderfull! ! ! poetry, prose, graphic, animation and music! Th3Mirr0r PASSED AWAY THE YEARS... Passed way the years... I was little child, Then, young, Now...i am old... I was a small blade of grass Growing up on a meadow But now, ...i must fall... I will born again... A new blade of grass, little, I will rise in the same place, Then, i must fall... I will be then a fir And when the time will come, I will cheer up again someone's soul, On Xmas, i will be there, in its home, ... On my top it will place a star... From my branches will make its chaplet And i, always, Alike a living Spirit, i will exist... The sorrow i'll change To someone, with happiness; A he or a she, will reach to know, Then, the Happiness... Happiness of a child, Who became over the yeas, a young; Passed away my years, Now, i am old... Passed away the years when i was playing in the sand, There, near my beloved sea; I had a castle, wonderfull, who...in time, Price of a second, it was, In the next one, vanishing, Swallowed, into sea's water... 'Why you build castle near sea's water, child? Its waves will took ur castle away, u know that well enough! ' 'Oh, yeah...i know, but don't forget something: The sand appertains to the sea... How i will take something that isn't myne? ! Who will wanna take something, who doesn't belong to it? ! Do you see well, the righteous answer, to your question? ! ' Passed away years, now And still there i am, near sea... I make another castle who won't last... But the magic of that second In which, with a smile, i will look it, Will last...my entire life... Last even now, when..being old, I tell my remembrance... I look at you, very well knowing That you'll smile...price of a second, In ur smile, I would have found... Happiness.. Oh, passwed away my years, alike the desert's sand Cos, came the storms, moved the dunes, The oasis full of life yet remained, There, somewhere, secluded... And the thirsty ones, found their peace... They were walking through desert, straying, Searching for a place of rest, To defend themselves of the strong sun, Who, from their journey, stopping them... From time to time, they noticing the oasis, Running to get to it... But there, there wasn't anything..but the mirage... Weaken there minds were! ! ... Conclusion would have been, now: They walked on a road of knowledge, But only the sand's inhabitants Know the secret of dunes... Passed away my years... But there remained something...remembrance... @Th3Mirr0r [ROMANIAN VERSION] TRECUT-AU ANII... Anii au trecut... Eram mic copil, Apoi tanar, Acum, sunt batran... Eram un fir de iarba Crescand pe o pajiste Acum, tre' sa cad... Un nou fir de iarba, micut, Voi creste in acelasi loc, Apoi, tre' sa cad... Voi fi apoi un brad Iar cand timpul va veni, Voi imbucura iar sufletul cuiva, De Craciun, voi fi acolo, in casa sa, ... In varful meu imi va aseza o stea... Din ramurelele mele-si va face cununa Iar eu, intotdeauna, Ca Spirit viu, voi exista... Tristetea-i voi schimba Cuiva, cu bucurie; Un el sau o ea, va sa stie, Atunci, Fericirea... Fericirea unui copil, Devenit peste ani, un tanar; Trecut-au anii mei, Acum, sunt batran... Trect-au anii cand ma jucam in nisip, Acolo, langa iubita-mi mare; Aveam un castel, minunat, ce...in timp, Pret de-o secunda, era, In urmatoarea, disparea, Inghitit, in apele marii... 'De ce-ti faci castel langa apa marii, copile? Valurile ti-l vor lua, stii bine! ' 'Ah, da, ...stiu, dar nu uita ceva: Nisipul, apartine marii... Cum voi putea lua ceva ce nu-i al meu? ! Cine va putea lua ceva ce nu-i al sau? ! Deci, vezi tu, oare, un adevar, in spusele mele? ! Vezi tu oare, raspunsul drept, al intrebarii tale? ! ' Trecut-au anii, acum Si tot acolo sunt, langa mare... Imi fac un alt castel ce nu va dura... Dar magia acelei secunde In care, cu un zambet, il voi privi, Va dura...toata viata mea... Dureaza si acum, cand...batran fiind, Imi spun amintirea... Ma uit la tine, foarte bine stiind Ca vei zambi...pret de-o secunda, In zambetul tau... Aflavo-mi eu... Fericirea... Ah, trect-au anii mei, precum nisipul desertului, Caci venit-au furtunile, mutara dunele, Oaza plina de viata inca ramase, Acolo, undeva, retrasa... Iar cei insetati, si-au gasit linistea... Mergeau prin desert, ratacind, Cautand sa se odihneasca, Sa se apere de soarele puternic, Ce din drum ii oprea... Din cand in cand, observau oaza, Alergau..sa ajunga la ea..... Dar acolo, nu era nimic...decat mirajul... Slabita le mai era mintea! ! ! Concluzia ar fi fost, acum: Mersera ei pe drumul cunoasterii, Dar numai locuitorii nisipurilor Cunosc secretele dunelor... Trecut-au anii mei... Ramase ceva...amintirea... @Th3Mirr0r THE MORNING AFTER Around, silence.. In silence, a shadow.. The shadow, a woman, She stays there, on a bench, crying.. A lack of confidence.. Confidence lost..cos there, in the meadow, Finds a peace, her man; He is there, in her arms, slowly, slowly, dying... Destiny.. Sometimes, has its own actions.. Irreversible situations, Alike when now, one is healthy And then..sudden..dies.. But his woman, stays there, near her man, Remembers the beautifull moments before they were gone And..cries... She remembers that one day before He was smiling back to her so full of life! But now, the merry moments are no more.. Sudden, in a morning after, gone, because of a strife... A strife seen in a casual death chain Cos her man Struggles to live.. He has no will, to leave.. 'I wish to lie down on the grass, my wife' He whispers, slowly, bearly breathing And the teary eyes of his woman, Looks at him, alike begging to remain alive.. She drags him off the bench, there, on the grass, Holds him dearly in her arms, And her silky hair covers his face, Alike the night covers the stars.. She close her eyes wishing again to feel the other soul, To give it life, To split her life.. 'Stay with me.. Do not leave me..' She says him, among tears, flowing in a river And her body, shiver, When pressing her lips In a silent life-kiss, Of a morning after... He's breathing normal now; The heart-attack stopped; The supply of blood and oxygen to an area of heart muscle is un-blocked, And lives.. All because of God's will To make happy a loving wife, Changing hand of fate, In a morning after... @Th3Mirr0r [ROMANIAN VERSION] DIMINEATA DE DUPA Imprejur, liniste.. In liniste, o umbra.. Umbra, o femeie, Ea sta acolo, pe o banca, plangand.. O lipsa a increderii.. Incredere pierduta..caci acolo, pe pajiste, Isi gaseste o pace, barbatul ei; El e acolo, in bratele ei, incet, incet, murind... Destin.. Uneori, are propriile-i sale actiuni.. Situatii ireversibile, Precum acum, cand cineva e sanatos Iar apoi..deodata..moare.. Dar femeia sa, sta acolo, langa barbatul ei, Isi aminteste momentele frumoase inainte ca ele sa dispara Si..plange... Ea-si aminteste ca in urma cu o zi El ii returna zambetul asa de plin de viata! Dar acum, momentele vesele nu mai sunt.. Deodata, intr-o dimineata de dupa, disparute, din cauza unui conflict... Un conflict vazut intr-un lant intamplator al mortii Caci barbatul ei Se chinuie sa traiasca.. El nu are nici o vointa, sa plece.. 'Doresc sa ma intind jos pe iarba, sotia mea' Sopteste el, incet, abia respirand Iar ochii inlacrimati ai femeii sale, Privesc catre el, ca si cum ar implora sa ramana in viata.. Ea-l trage jos de pe banca, acolo, pe iarba, Il tine dragostos in brate, Iar parul ei matasos ii acopera fata, Precum noaptea acopera stelele.. Ea-si inchide ochii vrand din nou sa simta celalalt suflet, Sa-i dea viata, Sa-mi imparta viata proprie.. 'Stai cu mine.. Nu ma parasi..' Ii spune ea, printre lacrimi, curgand intr-un rau, Iar corpul, ii tremura, Cand isi apasa buzele sale Intr-un tacut sarut al vietii, Al unei dimineti de dupa... El respira normal acum; Atacul de inima s-a oprit; Cantitatea de sange si oxigen dintr-o zona a unui muschi al inimii este deblocata, Iar el, traieste.. Toate acestea datorita vointei lui Dumnezeu De a face fericita o sotie iubitoare, Schimband mana destinului, Intr-o dimineata de dupa... @Th3Mirr0r P.S: ART & POETRY Project: Check my website to find out more: www.th3mirr0r.ismywebsite.com. Is a site of ART; wonderfull! ! ! poetry, prose, graphic, animation and music! Th3Mirr0r Quote http://www.th3mirr0r.ismywebsite.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th3mirr0r Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 i wished to share here some of my poems,since was an open topic for thank u for reading Quote http://www.th3mirr0r.ismywebsite.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltBait Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 Limerick: There once was a fat crocodile Watched films like a great cineophile The first one he saw Did leave him in awe But Twilight left his throat full of bile ...except "Twilight" is 2 syllables instead of 1. Oh well. Needs work I guess. Quote Click to play: Download: BoltBait's Plugin Pack | CodeLab | and how about a Computer Dominos Game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gamer_World14 Posted March 26, 2010 Author Share Posted March 26, 2010 I'm liking it BoltBait! Quote deviantART | Paint.NET Gallery | bennettfrazier.com <-- (My new Website!)  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltBait Posted March 27, 2010 Share Posted March 27, 2010 Maybe the last line should end "... steaming pile" Quote Click to play: Download: BoltBait's Plugin Pack | CodeLab | and how about a Computer Dominos Game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyrochild Posted March 27, 2010 Share Posted March 27, 2010 I think it's "cinephile." Quote ambigram signature by Kemaru [i write plugins and stuff] If you like a post, upvote it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SorinT Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 (edited) Thinking of Life As I close my eyes I see many things Some are nice but many frighten me Horrifying faces revealed to be dead beings But I also see creatures of marvelous beauty A raging war is being fought inside my heart A battle between fire and water,between darkness and light In one word it can be described as art Because victory can only be obtained with might I hold tightly in my hand the meaning of my life It's a frail creature i can easily kill But i don't do that,that is not my will I let it go but in my other hand i still hold a knife By Sorin T. Well here it is ....i know i am still far,far away from being a writer ),but i want to hear your opinions Edited August 18, 2010 by SorinT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGJM Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 I was asked to write a Villanelle for Writing Skills class recently. A Villanelle has a rhyme scheme of Hidden Content: A1 B A2 A B A1 A B A2 A B A1 A B A2 A B A1 A2 (A1 and A2 are copied exactly to wherever they are put) So, here is (roughly, from memory) what I wrote: How sweet is the night? A darkness so immense, Let it stay, if you might. Two men end their fight Concluding a minor disturbance How sweet is the night? A bird swirls mid flight Landing to decorate a nearby iron fence Let it stay, if you might. The world renewed in lack of light In an air cold and dense How sweet is the night? Some say things are sad when they aren't bright But the night disproves this in its true joyful brilliance Let it stay, if you might. The world needs it, alright. At the end of every day it is made less tense. How sweet is the night? Let it stay, if you might. To be honest, I am both proud of what I wrote but dislike it at the same time. I want to break the rules of the poems structure, as I feel like it could be improved that way. Anyways, I feel like you all enjoy challenges (yes, these are quite challenging to write - trust me) so I decided to share. Write your own before critiquing anyone. Quote The hardest part of ending is starting again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoltBait Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 I like it. Keep up the good work. As for the rules and structure of poetry... "Poetry without rules is like a tennis match without a net." - Robert Frost ...and he would know! Keep the structure. Expirement with different structures. Create your own. But, don't ever lose them. Here is a good resource for poets: http://www.rhymezone.com just type in a word and it will search for all words that rhyme with it. I've written MANY a poem using that site. Quote Click to play: Download: BoltBait's Plugin Pack | CodeLab | and how about a Computer Dominos Game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ego Eram Reputo Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 We already have this thread: Do we need another? Quote ebook: Mastering Paint.NET | resources: Plugin Index | Stereogram Tut | proud supporter of Codelab plugins: EER's Plugin Pack | Planetoid | StickMan | WhichSymbol+ | Dr Scott's Markup Renderer | CSV Filetype | dwarf horde plugins: Plugin Browser | ShapeMaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGJM Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 (edited) I like it. Keep up the good work. As for the rules and structure of poetry... "Poetry without rules is like a tennis match without a net." - Robert Frost ...and he would know! Keep the structure. Expirement with different structures. Create your own. But, don't ever lose them. Here is a good resource for poets: http://www.rhymezone.com just type in a word and it will search for all words that rhyme with it. I've written MANY a poem using that site. I wish I had my old English class. Robert Frost was one of my favorite poets, second to Emily Dickinson. Haven't read any of his poems in over a year, though. Edit: whoops, sorry EER. I read Bolt's post first, just saw yours... Edited May 9, 2012 by AGJM Quote The hardest part of ending is starting again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ego Eram Reputo Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 You can see how I won the Real Estate Award can't you? I'll see if I can merge this thread with the other.... Hey THAT WORKED! Quote ebook: Mastering Paint.NET | resources: Plugin Index | Stereogram Tut | proud supporter of Codelab plugins: EER's Plugin Pack | Planetoid | StickMan | WhichSymbol+ | Dr Scott's Markup Renderer | CSV Filetype | dwarf horde plugins: Plugin Browser | ShapeMaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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