PureSkill Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 Hi everyone, this is only my second post, i have been using pdn for 2 weeks now. what do you think of this pool table? i know, the centre pockets should be lower down, but oh well. please tell me what you think. PureSkill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boude Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 Nice some jagged egde and the pool table is a bit too shiny. Quote History repeats itself, because nobody was paying attention the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PureSkill Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share Posted January 19, 2009 Nice some jagged egde and the pool table is a bit too shiny. ok thanks for the advice and the quick reply, i realise that now. When i get round to it i will edit it and post the change Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PureSkill Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share Posted January 19, 2009 ok here it is ive feathered it, made a light, and added a highlight and some shadows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MegaNight Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 This forum is for Gallerys.. not a place to post a Singel Image, theres a Thread in the top for that.. Otherwise fine Pool Table. Quote --|-- My DeviantArt--|--My Gallery--|-- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boude Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 I believe that as long as (s)he has only 1 gallery everything will be just fine, back to topic: the egdes of the light... the light metallic texture could use a semi-transparent reflected gradient (a gradient with 1 color's alpha set to 0) with some light colors and some darker, and the light is a bit strange, oh and a tip for jagged egdes: gaussian blur+ 1 or 2 with only alpha channel. Quote History repeats itself, because nobody was paying attention the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PureSkill Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share Posted January 19, 2009 a) so if i rename this topic to "PureSkill's images" then it will be OK? ty for advice i will try that and post in 2 mins... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 It looks pretty good,but i have a few suggestions if you want to try. The lines for the overhead light seem a bit too thick,you may want to trim those down,maybe use thinner lines then lower the opacity to give it an outline but not make it be overpowering. You may also want to use some textured text and have something written on the table like some tables do to make it look less plain,i know a lot of tables are just green but i think in as an art project you may want to add it to give it a little more. These are just suggestions if you want to keep them in mind.Looks like you did a good job so far though.Did you base this from a stock image? If so you should post a link to it on here. good work though keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PureSkill Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share Posted January 19, 2009 :shock: OMG sry guys i just realised that i didnt save a pdn type, so i only saved the flattened image. <"idiot!" "idiot!" "idiot!" > oh well, to semi make up for it ill post this: it was based on an image of a guitar i found here: http://www.infovisual.info/04/032_en.html oh and @cola: ty for all the advice ill remember that when i try to recreate it, and the base image can be found here: http://www.redlionstalis.com/Image/Menu ... 0table.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted January 19, 2009 Share Posted January 19, 2009 no prob man,practice makes perfect,the more you make the better you will get.You know you still need a sig and an avatar,maybe make pool related ones to start out with since you have a bit of experience with it. also the body of the guitar reminds me of a horseshoe crab lol http://skywalker.cochise.edu/wellerr/fossil/trilobite/6fssl-horseshoe-crab-3.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PureSkill Posted January 20, 2009 Author Share Posted January 20, 2009 kk ty for advice and lol yeah i see that too, i think i will get to work on a sig and avatar, and speaking of which, i really like yours. btw i have made this, using this tutorial: viewtopic.php?f=44&t=27493 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 thank you very much,im glad you like it! The book turned out pretty good,keep practicing your getting the basics down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boude Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 some jagged edges Edit:use alpha masks, it's the best way., and the background is a bit plain, try using clouds with low roughness and large scale, then set constrast to 100 and gaussian blur with high radius then curves. Quote History repeats itself, because nobody was paying attention the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jmae Posted February 1, 2010 Share Posted February 1, 2010 It is good of you to take note small details such as the centre pocket should be lowered down and also the lighting. Anyway, you did a nice try in making a pool table. The lines are just a bit jagged. Memphis Patio Furniture Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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