williamhernandez

umm, you're welcome

wow, it's way too advanced

well what language is that page? i tried translating it but it didn't work

Yes it is... I somehow feel that the planet exploding is so big behind the character that it is going to get him into the explosion... May be you could make the size of the planet smaller to give a feel that he is born out of it... just my silly thought... ok, but my idea was that he destroid the planet. but thnx for the advise

i think that's my best work

i just added a character